四級寫作經典范文及點評：上網學習
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英語四級作文
如果有需要學習的東西，到哪里去找呢？隨著物質文明的進步，生活方式越來越走向多元化，學習方式也多樣化了。這篇文章談論的就是現今流行的學習方式。
On-Line Learning
Let us say there is something you don’t know how to do. In the past if you were determined to learn, you might have called a friend or a relative, taken a night class or walked down to the local library for a research term. But now a host of websites are springing up to provide free practical advice on these subjects and actually anything else you can think of.①
In one sense, these “how-to” sites represent the growing world of on-line learning.② This tradition found one of its earliest forms in the FAQs — Frequently Asked Questions files — that began on Usenet, the Internet’s global discussion group. The FAQs, many of which still circulate (go round continuously), took a specific subject and explained it to complete novices.
But “how-to” sites take the FAQs idea in a somewhat different direction by addressing subjects that aren’t necessarily related to discussion forums. These sites take the style of a written tutorial (teaching period) and a tone of friendly advice. Possibly the biggest and best known of these sites is learn2.com (www.learn2.com). It offers nearly 1,000 free tutorials and adds new ones frequently for a job interview. At ehow.com (www.ehow.com) you can learn how to train for your first marathon, how to buy a vacation home, or how to make a movie in eight steps.
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行文點評
本文按照總分結構模式對on-line learning進行描述。以假設開頭，自然引入正文，首段指出人總會有需要學習的東西。第二段中對過去和現在的學習場所做了對比：以前去圖書館，現在上網。第三段講上網學習的起源。第四段介紹網上學習的現狀。
本文短短200多字，對比了過去和現在的學習方法，并把現在的做法從起源到現狀進行清晰明了的介紹，列舉了許多實例使文章更加具有信服力，也使內容更加完整。
好文妙譯
上網學習
讓我們假設有些事你不知道如何去做。在過去如果你決心要學習如何做這些事，可能會給朋友或親戚打電話，上夜校或到當地圖書館查找。但現在出現了眾多網站可以為這些話題、事實上能為你所想到的任何其他事情提供免費實用的建議。
從某種意義上而言，這些“技能”網站代表了網上學習的不斷發展的世界。這一傳統的最初形式是Usenet，即全球網絡討論組織最先開始使用的FAQs——即常見問題檔案。許多FAQs現在仍很流行，這種FAQs就某個話題向新手做解釋。
但是這些“技能”網站把FAQs的創意做了少許改動，選擇主題不一定和某個論壇有關。這些網站采用書面指導(教學時間)的形式和友好建議的口吻。也許這些網站中最大最有名的就是learn2.com (www.learn2.com)。這個網站提供近千種免費指導，還經常加入新的招聘面試指南。從ehow.com ( www.ehow.com)你可以學到如何在第一次馬拉松前進行訓練，如何購買度假別墅，如何用八步法制作電影。
詞匯斟酌
?circulate v. 循環，流通，傳播
?novice n. 新手
?forum n. 論壇
?tutorial n. 個人輔導時間手冊，輔導班
?marathon n. 馬拉松
佳句臨摹
①【注釋】spring up涌現，大量出現
【臨摹】New towns are springing up to house the increasing population.許多新的城鎮拔地而起，使不斷增加的人口有安身之所。
②【注釋】in one sense 即in a sense 在某種意義上
【臨摹】What you say is true in one sense.在某種意義上你說的是正確的。
思如泉涌
A good head and an industrious hand are worth gold in any land.聰明腦袋勤勞手，走遍天下貴如金。
All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。
On-Line Learning
Let us say there is something you don’t know how to do. In the past if you were determined to learn, you might have called a friend or a relative, taken a night class or walked down to the local library for a research term. But now a host of websites are springing up to provide free practical advice on these subjects and actually anything else you can think of.①
In one sense, these “how-to” sites represent the growing world of on-line learning.② This tradition found one of its earliest forms in the FAQs — Frequently Asked Questions files — that began on Usenet, the Internet’s global discussion group. The FAQs, many of which still circulate (go round continuously), took a specific subject and explained it to complete novices.
But “how-to” sites take the FAQs idea in a somewhat different direction by addressing subjects that aren’t necessarily related to discussion forums. These sites take the style of a written tutorial (teaching period) and a tone of friendly advice. Possibly the biggest and best known of these sites is learn2.com (www.learn2.com). It offers nearly 1,000 free tutorials and adds new ones frequently for a job interview. At ehow.com (www.ehow.com) you can learn how to train for your first marathon, how to buy a vacation home, or how to make a movie in eight steps.
［221 words］
行文點評
本文按照總分結構模式對on-line learning進行描述。以假設開頭，自然引入正文，首段指出人總會有需要學習的東西。第二段中對過去和現在的學習場所做了對比：以前去圖書館，現在上網。第三段講上網學習的起源。第四段介紹網上學習的現狀。
本文短短200多字，對比了過去和現在的學習方法，并把現在的做法從起源到現狀進行清晰明了的介紹，列舉了許多實例使文章更加具有信服力，也使內容更加完整。
好文妙譯
上網學習
讓我們假設有些事你不知道如何去做。在過去如果你決心要學習如何做這些事，可能會給朋友或親戚打電話，上夜校或到當地圖書館查找。但現在出現了眾多網站可以為這些話題、事實上能為你所想到的任何其他事情提供免費實用的建議。
從某種意義上而言，這些“技能”網站代表了網上學習的不斷發展的世界。這一傳統的最初形式是Usenet，即全球網絡討論組織最先開始使用的FAQs——即常見問題檔案。許多FAQs現在仍很流行，這種FAQs就某個話題向新手做解釋。
但是這些“技能”網站把FAQs的創意做了少許改動，選擇主題不一定和某個論壇有關。這些網站采用書面指導(教學時間)的形式和友好建議的口吻。也許這些網站中最大最有名的就是learn2.com (www.learn2.com)。這個網站提供近千種免費指導，還經常加入新的招聘面試指南。從ehow.com ( www.ehow.com)你可以學到如何在第一次馬拉松前進行訓練，如何購買度假別墅，如何用八步法制作電影。
詞匯斟酌
?circulate v. 循環，流通，傳播
?novice n. 新手
?forum n. 論壇
?tutorial n. 個人輔導時間手冊，輔導班
?marathon n. 馬拉松
佳句臨摹
①【注釋】spring up涌現，大量出現
【臨摹】New towns are springing up to house the increasing population.許多新的城鎮拔地而起，使不斷增加的人口有安身之所。
②【注釋】in one sense 即in a sense 在某種意義上
【臨摹】What you say is true in one sense.在某種意義上你說的是正確的。
思如泉涌
A good head and an industrious hand are worth gold in any land.聰明腦袋勤勞手，走遍天下貴如金。
All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。