愛情是人類世界永恒不變的話題。有人說缺少愛情會讓生活索然無味，而有些人卻認為，愛情讓人變得盲目，缺少理性。愛情更是大學校園的敏感話題。
　　Love in College
　　As a college student, campus is our home, a warm and sunny house, you can find the vigor to live and sustain for ever. But do remember there is unusual scenery you should pay great attention to, that is the love in the campus. When it comes to this theme, various words rushed into my mind, sweet, happy, love for ever, everything sounds to be wonderful.
　　However, our elders always exaggerate about love in college. They believe that it is a waste of time and money. It will make students to forget their studies and eventually may even destroy their lives.
　　As for me, although I am looking forward to having an excellent boy study and live with me, it is just a dream actually.① We are still children, do not have enough experience in love; we do not take in the spirit of true love.② For us it is just a good feeling, a slight feeling because of well-dressed or handsome appearance, not by instinct. How about the personality or her habits, we do not know, we just love because of her beauty. Love depending on this will certainly go not so further, one day, you find you two are unable to share in the same way, you will quit, leaving tears fallen down. It turns out that love in the campus is commonly short and dreamful.
　　I think after you become mature enough, then you can use your sharp eyes to recognize people, find who you really suit to, then, take it seriously.③
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　　本文遵循總分總結構模式對校園愛情這個話題進行了分析和闡述。第一段引出話題，第二段列舉長輩的意見提出對校園愛情反對的觀點。隨后在下一段中作者又進一步提出自己對校園愛情的看法。最后一段作為總結，提出希望和建議。
　　文章結構精巧，論證有力，正反對比加強了論證的效果。段落之間運用了however，as for me 這樣的過渡詞使文章思路更加清晰，一目了然。certainly, seriously這樣的詞匯更使作者的態度鮮明確定。文章使用口語體的形式，所以在一些連接詞的使用上沒有過于遵守語法規則，這一點需要注意。
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　　校園愛情
　　作為一個大學生，校園就是我們的家，是充滿溫馨和陽光的大家園，在這里我們活力四射，朝氣蓬勃。但是，別忘了，你也應該注意到有這樣一道特殊風景正在悄悄蔓延，那就是校園愛情。每當提起這個字眼，各種美好的景象不禁使我浮想聯翩，甜蜜，幸福，一生一世，所有這一切聽起來都如此美妙。
　　相反，長輩們卻總是過于夸大大學里的愛情。他們認為愛情只是在浪費時間和金錢，而且會使學生們荒廢學業，最終可能會毀掉他們的一生。
　　而對于我來說，盡管也期待著有個優秀的男孩相伴，一起讀書和生活，但這只不過是一個夢罷了。我知道我們還都只是稚氣未脫的孩子，缺乏戀愛的經驗，我們并沒有領悟愛情的精髓。愛情對于我們來說，可能只是一種好感，一種受穿著和外表吸引的微妙情愫，并非出于本性。關于對方的性格喜好我們一無所知，我們只是傾心于她美麗的容顏。這樣的愛情并不會長久，直到有一天你終于發現你們再沒有任何共同點，于是你們選擇放棄這段感情，并為此黯然落淚。于是校園愛情往往只是短暫的夢幻。
　　我認為，只有真正走向成熟以后，你才具備足夠敏銳的眼光去認識別人，最終找到真正適合自己的另一半，然后珍視你們的感情。
　　詞匯斟酌
　　?vigor n. 精力，活力
　　?sustain vt. 維持，持續
　　?scenery n. 風景，景色
　　?exaggerate v. 夸大，夸張
　　?instinct n. 本能，直覺，天性
　　?personality n. 人格，個性
　　佳句臨摹
　　①【注釋】look forward to期待做…，盼望….
　　【臨摹】They are looking forward to her visit.他們在期待著她的來訪。
　　②【注釋】take in理解，吸收
　　【臨摹】We couldn’t take in the meaning of the word.我們無法理解這個詞的含義。
　　③【注釋】take sth. seriously嚴肅對待…，認真看待…
　　【臨摹】You should step away from the video games，and take your study seriously.你應該遠離電子游戲，認真對待學業。
　　思如泉涌
　　Love me little, love me long. 愛不貴親密，貴長久。
　　Love is blind. 愛情是盲目的。